The Secrets Hope Of Love Poem by april woods

The Secrets Hope Of Love

Rating: 4.3


the secrets hope of love is a key that hold love in your heart for no one can take for you the secrets of love is a locket that you can use to hide your love in a safe place that you can only keep it for your love the secrets of love is an powerful gife for you and me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 23 February 2009

This is not written very clearly. Some of the words are repeated in such a way that they confuse the thoughts that the writer is trying to convey. Again, there are more words than needed here. The writing is spotty with some words as well. The message is fine but it is not transmitted to the reader very well. GW62

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