The Shine Disappears Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

The Shine Disappears

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I shall remember
As friends for ever
She seemed to me like flower
Best out of all as rose with flavor

I do not know
But saying too goes
With favor of such people
To cite with many examples

I know how painful it is!
To miss near one as she was
She stayed with all the emotions
To water the plant with bond and relation

So the plant grew with scent like fragrance
Even passers by used to smell it at once
How could I resist such temptation?
When she was to leave with no relation!

I was nervous for not losing her
But the way she was dealing with care
I always admired even at the cost of being criticized
As I was fond of her and totally mesmerized

Such kind of people are hardly found on earth
We miss them till the time of death
What a way of leaving behind impression?
One may wonder and live always with obsession

Have you ever noticed gloom on face?
The shine disappears without any traces
There prevails uncertainty in life for some more time
The loss of flower indeed has remained sometimes

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