The Silence After The Whispers Poem by Salman Javid

The Silence After The Whispers

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He never professed, to be a friend;
He only made felt, of his friendship:
He never said a word,
He only whispered in the ear,
For a better tomorrow:
The wonderfully surprising whispers,
The whispers for changing the world of tomorrow;
The whispers of hope and imagination;
The whispers, those were
Prized so much;
Now the whisperer has gone for so long;
and may not be for so good;
Leaving behind nothing, but
The silence after the whispers!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Margery Rehman 21 November 2007

Salman, a very touching piece. I would advise looking at the last four lines again to get a smoother flow in the Fourth and third last especially since the last two are quite powerful. Warm regards, Margery.

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