The Silent Hall Poem by Shabeeh Haider

The Silent Hall

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There is no breeze,
The leaves don't blow.
No flowers dance,
Nor rivers flow.

No buzz of bee,
No song of bird.
Even your breath,
Cannot be heard.

No creak nor hum,
There is no sound.
And signs of life,
Cannot be found.

Life seems to have
Moved far apart.
It seems I've stepped
Inside my heart.

The Silent Hall
Thursday, September 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,poetry,sad love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 27 September 2018

A well depiction on sad love has been made by you astutely. It may be cited.... No buzz of bee, No song of bird. Even your breath, Cannot be heard. Beautiful poem nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

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Shabeeh Haider 28 September 2018

Thank you for your very kind words. Stay blessed

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