Isabella Francis

Rookie (18 June 1996 / India)

The Someone - Poem by Isabella Francis

Rushing through my cheeks like a waterfall,
Beware of the night when tears fall.
Beware, for they won't let me sleep,
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Comments about The Someone by Isabella Francis

  • Veteran Poet - 1,525 Points Jak Black (2/2/2015 1:28:00 AM)

    To fight for all and lose for none,
    In tormenting me life has great fun.

    A very lovely poem Isabella. I like the rhyming and the message you impart. Sadly you lose the metered flow in the last three stanzas, which is a shame (too many syllables) . You are a very talented young lady. Congratulations on being chosen for poem of the day. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,190 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/2/2014 11:15:00 PM)

    Very Beautiful poem.
    I dive for Pearls
    To glitter others life...
    Though no one cares for me
    Whatever I do it for anyone.
    But there is someone who is behind the scene
    Watching me with care
    I am so sure about her
    That she will surely come to rescue me.
    Ending of the poem is powerful with positive words..
    Really I loved reading your poem Isabella....Thanks for this lovely poem.

    Congrats! Its your poem is chosen for poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,038 Points Kee Thampi (2/2/2014 10:18:00 PM)

    how lovely Isabella writes, her mind of a philosophic......
    In an attempt to make others' life glitter,
    I dive for pearls and for life splutter.

    But behind the scenes there is someone who is waiting for a cue,
    And she, is sure to come to my rescue. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,804 Points Soumita Sarkar (2/2/2014 10:10:00 AM)

    GOOD...I really like the concept as it grows and brings the friend in forefront....... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 900 Points Leslie Philibert (2/2/2014 5:19:00 AM)

    OK, the theme is not original, and bestest is a terrible grammatical mistake... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,519 Points Gajanan Mishra (2/2/2013 5:12:00 AM)

    She comes to make sure I am scared and spared. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie isabella Francis (2/3/2012 7:58:00 AM)

    Kee and Saint Thanks a lot for your appreciation.. It was one of my first poems Thanks a lot... :) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,038 Points Kee Thampi (2/2/2012 11:45:00 PM)

    poetry is the flow from the soul to song
    But behind the scenes there is someone who is waiting for a cue,
    And she, is sure to come to my rescue.

    Even when I'm utterly scared, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 61 Points Thomas Duncky (2/2/2012 10:56:00 AM)

    Great, ths is absolutely great. My girlfriend is kinda goin through same sleepless nights and am hopin 2 get her read this even though she is not into poems. But artistically its a great poem. Luv it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie isabella Francis (10/19/2011 10:01:00 AM)

    Thanks Prachi and Abhishek... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 19 Points Abhishek Tiwari (10/17/2011 1:55:00 PM)

    A true poet never writes a single word he just pours his heart out..
    Here you have done that..
    Be true with your words be true with your feelings, .like in this poem, always..
    All the best (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Prachi Agrawal (9/24/2011 8:56:00 AM)

    amazing............. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie isabella Francis (9/21/2011 4:46:00 AM)

    Thank you so much.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sam Varghis (9/20/2011 4:19:00 AM)

    Great, especialy considering your age. Read good poems of classical poets. Write a lot. Belive that you are a good writer. You will be a No 1 poetess of tomorrow. Best regards, sam (Report) Reply










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