The Song Of Heaven (Haiku) Poem by Aufie Zophy

The Song Of Heaven (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


the song of heaven
sweetly sung by breaking waves
heaven kissed the sea

Tuesday, December 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sea
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Sebastian 08 January 2015

Beautiful three lines of heaven's love of earth. Indeed, all creation sing the love song of heaven. Good reflection.

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M Asim Nehal 24 September 2016

Nice song......Liked it

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Unwritten Soul 11 January 2015

And the fishes underneath swim with heavenly smile....love it :)

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Lyn Paul 10 January 2015

A clever design of the song of the sea.

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Mihaela Pirjol 10 January 2015

I have read the sonnet first and then the haiku version; being very fond of haiku, all I can say is - I love it! A great haiku!

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Akhtar Jawad 09 January 2015

What a lovely idea! A love song responded by a kiss that stole the aurora......................10

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