Shahzia Batool

Freshman - 829 Points (Pakistan)

The Song Of Life! - Poem by Shahzia Batool

Upon the unkind shores of the rough Sea
under the merciless blows of the mighty winds
you have to dig your heels deep
into the slippery sands;

'midst the ear-deafening noise of the moody Nature
the flute of life needs to compose
the melodies of existence
willy-nilly, or happily;

Do not put your fingers either on the lips of clouds
or into the entrails of your ears,
they have to whisper their solemn secrets
in the most wished for downpour
on the slaked soil of the parched ground;

the buds will bloom
the birds will sing
the hope will rule the way of the world
the Sun will do the role of the Christ
in the play of resurrection and crucifixion;

The Stars will throw their glistening glow,
life will run on the balanced beats,
think before you touch the waters
it won't be possible
to stop the ripples of reaction to be made
either of retaliation or reciprocation,
it depends on how you touch the waters
this is the theme of life this song is all about!


Comments about The Song Of Life! by Shahzia Batool

  • Veteran Poet - 1,166 Points Oduro Bright Amoh (10/9/2013 4:35:00 AM)

    beautiful poem.... just beautiful. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,311 Points Lyn Paul (8/18/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    Hope will rule the way of the world. In our theme of life. Beautiful words. Have a beautiful day Every day providing your song of life (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dannielle Smedley (8/18/2013 7:01:00 AM)

    Wow, this is amazing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,743 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/14/2013 7:45:00 AM)

    Fantastic write. I can see all the lovely comments and I agree with them as no words are left for me to write..
    Beautiful poem. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (8/13/2013 12:21:00 PM)

    This optimistic note from you have come like a real song on life we aspire for....
    The poet in you are elevated to still a higher platform with this write Miss Shahzia Batool. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aswath Raman (8/13/2013 3:00:00 AM)

    Yes. Every crucifixion will result in a resurrection. Whether its Christ, or sun or even memories for that matter. Great write Ma'am! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,619 Points Valsa George (8/13/2013 12:41:00 AM)

    This is a fantastic write Shahzia! Retaliation or reciprocation depends on how we touch the waters.... The theme of this poem is truely the theme of life! Digging the heels deep into the slippery sands is a beautiful image! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (8/13/2013 12:23:00 AM)

    Reactive indeed, unknown, great mystery. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,885 Points Heather Wilkins (8/12/2013 9:52:00 PM)

    a excellent write on the song of life. and we all sing that song the last stanza so lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,391 Points Ramesh Rai (8/12/2013 9:48:00 PM)

    life will come life will go but resonance of song of life shall ever be echoing through ages (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,515 Points Valerie Dohren (8/12/2013 11:36:00 AM)

    Superb poem - love the last verse, reminiscent of the Law of Karma. It depends on how you touch the waters - great line, deep and meaningful. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 657 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (8/12/2013 9:19:00 AM)

    The Song of Life depicts your immense love for Nature. Each stanza glistens, Shahzia! Well written! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (8/12/2013 5:51:00 AM)

    The hope of nature will survive all thing that we throw at it. I wonder.... A good poem Shahzia. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,962 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/12/2013 5:39:00 AM)

    Ripples of reaction or reciprocation depend on how you touch the waters. In spite of all that we know, nature is still unpredictable. Captured in the poem beautifully. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chandana Khan (8/12/2013 4:43:00 AM)

    “In the hour of adversity be not without hope For crystal rain falls from black clouds”
    a persian proverb for this nature poem with a message of hope.10 marks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Poet's Fan (8/12/2013 4:34:00 AM)

    ''the buds will bloom
    the birds will sing
    the hope will rule the way of the world
    the Sun will do the role of the Christ
    in the play of resurrection and crucifixion; '''' this beautiful stanza sums up the theme of the poem so beautifully, , i will not add any more words to my opinion on this lovely poem, , this is simple at face value, but so highly philosophical when read between the lines, a poet and critic of shahzia's caliber can compose such a poem, , (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,245 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (8/12/2013 3:11:00 AM)

    the hopes Nature nurtures, and sometimes the glooms of despair, rise through this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sun Shine (8/12/2013 2:44:00 AM)

    Strong and strengthening, wonderful song of will-power in life. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 543 Points Yasmeen Khan (8/12/2013 2:23:00 AM)

    A tuneful song composed on the strings of life ' the melodies of existence' like 'downpours on slaked' souls and drops on parched lips...sometimes I think if our hearts were not blessed with the love of Nature how we would express our sober feelings of gloom and happiness. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 14, 2013


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