The Sound Of Nature Poem by Romeo Della Valle

The Sound Of Nature

Rating: 5.0


I begged the sky to hold off
But it answered me with such a sound,
The clouds raised their puffy lids
And tears came tumbling down...

(By surprise) cursed thunder first
Followed by a quieter prayer,
Then, with hesitation wept,
The grieved windows of the spheres...

I nodded and descended,
So familiar was the plea
That no rejoinder I made
And Let the damp weather be...

I, too, knew that the darkness
Was merely a passageway
Beguiling travelers of truth
Through steps of uncertainty...


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 30 May 2012

perhaps nature weeps for us! very good poem.

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Heather Wilson 02 June 2012

I feel nature creeps into our soul at times and weeps with us.

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Hans Vr 19 June 2012

Superb poem with magnificent last lines. The gloomy start with an end full of hope and positivity. Fantastic

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Valerie Dohren 17 June 2012

Excellent poem with a great message.

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Kaila George 13 June 2012

The beauty of nature Always mystifies man Its sound its site Makes us forever in bliss At times we're scared At its energy raw But the beauty it gives Makes us sigh in bliss Beautiful poem...bravo...10++++

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Captain Cur 11 June 2012

How uncertain our steps are in the dark. A wonderfully expressed cleansing poem of nature and man.

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Nontobeko Dlamini 02 June 2012

A well penned poem. Good use of personification and metaphor that are original and provide vivid details that ignites the senses. Thank you for sharing.

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