Premila Patel


The Sound of Rain...


I lie so relaxed in my bedroom reading the novel about love….

Trickle Trickle Trickle…..is the sound of the falling rain…yes I can hear it...
It’s so refreshing…It’s also a little scented…with a soft breeze blowing in gently though the open window.
Pitter, Patter Pitter.…is the sound of the raindrops now drumming hard against my window.
Raindrops so crystal clear it’s even tempting to hold out a glass and catch a drink of the rain…
So clean and so natural from above so high…Its purity is a real delicacy.
Puddles now rippling on the uneven pavements.
Ripple, Ripple, Ripple.... is yet another extraordinary sound.
I see a couple across the park cuddling up so warmly
underneath a shelter admiring the pretty rain as it starts to pour down.
I want to dance and get absolutely soaked in the rain! ! !
I want to sing 'Singin in the Rain' with a big black umbrella! ! !
Rain, Rain please come again, you’re needed now & forever.
You play a beautiful part of nature and living…

Trickle, Trickle, Trickle…
Pitter Patter Pitter…
Ripple, Ripple Ripple…
Is the most sweetest sound of RAIN to my ears…

Submitted: Wednesday, March 25, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, March 25, 2009

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Comments about this poem (The Sound of Rain... by Premila Patel )

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (10/9/2009 10:09:00 PM)

    Some beautiful words were painted in this poem
    making very beautiful to read
    good job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Rup Pokharel (9/13/2009 2:46:00 PM)

    wow! !
    very beautiful piece.
    nice to read...10++++

    if you have some spare time do go thro'my
    TRUE INDEED
    MY ETERNAL SAY
    ODD DAY ACCOUNT
    FOR THE UNBORN
    and do cast vote if it deserves and give me your comments please. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Fiona Davidson (4/4/2009 5:29:00 PM)

    Beatiful image filled write Premila...thank you ....10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 144 Points Nimal Dunuhinga (4/4/2009 4:37:00 PM)

    The sound of rain gives vivid meanings and if the rain continues what a solace to the burning heart? A well written poem to the reader's heart. (Report) Reply

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