The Stars Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN
The Stars
Souls of thought dance in gloom
Hopes and dreams of life abide to bloom.
Fresh air of solitudeness now I feel
Like the caress of breeze in my heel.
Memories opened their cave
To enchain me again as their slave.
Everytime I wanted to cage them in mind
As I've once suffered the rage of that wind.
Those were the days of endurance
And no one helped me in that furnace
Where I broke my bones to bossom,
The dreams that slept in my bosom
That was the saddest time of my heart,
Where I coudn't ride the life of my cart.
The pains that I hid under my skin,
I thought they were my akin.
I raised my head to the sky,
I never wanted to fly,
Without the wings on my shoulder
With the burdens on my shoulder
I gazed at the shining stars
They never did find my tears
I called them, my friend!
I never did act as a fiend.
To you my friend-
The stars,
With tears!
Its true..when we crush the memories, surely one feels the rage of winds in mind! gud one!
This is the thing about poetry and Art in general in that we can make beautiful metaphores out of the most hidious pain. Your poem ends flying hi to the stars, Vipins! ERA
in the stars, or in the wrinkles of the hand, lies eternity! good poem!
What a superb poetic talent you have! Please, my friend, keep writing.
The pains that I hid under my skin, I thought they were my akin.....awesome lines: -)
It is my pleasure to the poetic lines like these. I think the feeling expressed here by the poet is about a broken friendship or love or may be both. Whatever might be the reason yet i enjoy the beauty in these lines. 'And I gazed at the shining stars They never did find my tears I asked them, why didn't you become my friend? I never did act as a fiend. To you my friend- It is well articulated thought of the poet flowed all through the poem sprinkling adrenaline. Dearest poet you are laudable and commendable and appreciable and remarkable. Perfect 10 ++++ Effort.... Bye for now.... The stars, With tears! '
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 5:30:19 PM # 1.0.0.1119
no words to explain.............i like it very much.great