The Struggle Of Nature.................... Poem by Reshma Dream Is Never A Crime................

The Struggle Of Nature....................



Earth has not had a bath
As there is not enough water
For rains
She has stayed ugly for years now
Making all the places stink

Waters boil in the normal daylight
People have a bath with a sweat
All the green has turned orange
And all the blue to black
Prices of food hiking up
Many die of thirst and hunger

Nature has failed to satisfy
To satisfy man’s greed
Every little animal
Is left to pay
And man is left to eat
To eat his own concrete buildings……………………

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Daly 06 June 2008

Christ, this is miserable. But I like it. The metaphor of the bath is a good one and you use it to maximum effect. I don't go along with the expressed sentiment of the poem, but it reads really well and that is what counts.

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