The Suit Case Is Empty Poem by Lyn Paul

Carrying the load with empty baggage to reduce tension on journey of life in wise and interesting road is very fantastic seems to be humorous to present many things in one fold. Carrying heavy load by hand is also a common practice in life. Although freedom is a simple word still it has deepness and this makes us realize life very well. Interesting poem shared definitely...10

Nicely penned poem, I liked the metaphor Suit case which we all carry in this life and unable to offload it, this burden is must to keep walking.....Loved it, thanks for sharing such a thought provoking poem.

Nicely penned poem, I liked the metaphor Suit case which we all carry in this life and unable to offload it, this burden is must to keep walking.....Loved it, thanks for sharing such a thought provoking poem............10

Excellently presented poem. A profound one.

I agree and great poem

sinkers can be stinkers! ! to MyPoemList. i seem to have not done it last time around. bri :)

i guess NIgel missed soemthin' the first time around....which was fairly obvious. Congratulations to whomever this poem is about! bri :)

Carried so long! ! But, there is hope ahead. Thanks for sharing.

I liked it, I may be wrong but here in the UK baggage can sometimes mean getting rid of a bad marriage or simply children off to Uni now. I will have to read it again for some clues... NN

lovely poem and yes, we all would like to live our life without burden, without baggage on our shoulders...nicely related to a suitcase, a weightless load