hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 53,114 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

The Sun Has Role - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

The sun has dominant role to play
No one can suggest any best way
Whole of world energy is depended upon
No other alternative can be thought even

On of powerful celestial body is never questioned
Everywhere the name of sun is mentioned
The universe without sun can not be imagined
Only one sun has the important role to be played

On the contrary, the night has same equal role
When sun is no more effect, there prevails lull
Whole of the world comes to grinding halt
No one finds or tries to focus on fault

The sun has power to illuminate whole world
In our childhood days we were certainly told
The night was painted as gloomy and dark
Where not even dog preferred to bark

Yes, all living beings go to sleep
So next days schedule can be kept
Millions of flood lights can not give enough light
As sun does in his capacity through out

For years the sun is emitting rays
No one knows about the coming days
What can happen if sun goes silent?
No one will be able to answer at present


Comments about The Sun Has Role by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2014 7:16:00 PM)

    Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh!
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  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/14/2014 9:34:00 PM)

    nice dude


    Lyrical Poet1 minute ago
    i like the flow of it, keep it up
    Comment +1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/14/2014 9:34:00 PM)

    well done, keep sharing


    Anna Laurencio2 minutes ago
    well done, keep sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/14/2014 9:25:00 PM)

    The sun has dominant role to play
    No one can suggest any best way (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 14, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 15, 2014


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