The Sun - Moon Poem by Deepti Agarwal

The Sun - Moon

Rating: 5.0


Golden Yellow fiery ball
pasted on the white wall
inspires everyone
forcing the darkness behind
acting as a warm friend.

Calm white soothing ball
shows its face when night falls
guides in the darkness
promising to send the light
which will bring delight.

nothing is complete without them
necessary is the warmth
and, so is the calm.

~~09/05/08~~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

the mom and dad for life, , lovely poem

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rohit sapra 24 May 2008

Sun and moon surely have their own significance and not one of them can be replaced by the other. So this poem is surely nice to read.

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Kesav Easwaran 12 May 2008

a delightful sunny poem...gives moon like cooling effect!

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Aashish Ameya 12 May 2008

very nice poem..i also wrote on the same...

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