Bette Kayley Jones

Rookie (April 5,1998 / Toronto, Canada)

The Sunset


The sunset glistens upon the land,
with people standing hand in hand,
the beauty that it brings to them,
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  • Rookie Rose Jones (5/11/2012 7:47:00 PM)

    Valese, something went VERY wrong (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nims-sunshine Princess (3/26/2012 12:18:00 PM)

    Nice way to explain the sunset light....~ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rose Jones (3/3/2012 1:09:00 PM)

    oh, you murderer. you were so sane when you were in third grade. something went wrong. very wrong. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,578 Points Ric S. Bastasa (2/16/2012 4:39:00 PM)

    have a nice view of the sunset... sit a while facing it, savor the change of colors, and feel what fades within you and without you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rudeyard Kipling (2/15/2012 5:26:00 PM)

    It is ok....but a word to the wise...if you want to write about a sunset....you have to really work to find things that have not been said or compare it to a person or event in a spectacular way.
    ....after saying all that you could improve some of mine if you like.... :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ninja Soul (2/14/2012 9:07:00 PM)

    This poem is okay...It's not the best though....But keep writing. (Report) Reply

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