The Swan Poem by Lucas Lingerfelt

The Swan

Rating: 5.0


Bright as the sun, white as the moon
Bathed in light she will happily swoon
A long graceful neck; wings pure as snow
She dances on water performing her show

She flies through the air; her own bird of a feather
Her connection to angels; no one can sever
A figure of beauty, grace, and poise
A perfect part of life’s many joys

Only God could form her beautiful regularity
Forged by his hand with love and crystal clarity
And because of it’s beauty, grace, and poise;
She will stand forever as one of Gods greatest ploys

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Charles Darkly 06 January 2012

This is rather good. Rated a 10. Quick question though: Her connection to angels; no one can severe Should this be sever? I constantly post typos so I try to help where I can haha.

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