Kelvin TakyiBobi

The Third Fact - Poem by Kelvin TakyiBobi

In a battle, a friend I fought the
Definition of love. None won.
That night, from the battle field,
I established many but two memorable
One, love is between the lìving and
Two, love is between the living and
So many years passed convinced
By the two.
One day a lightinning idea
Struck me! Opened revelation in me.
And it says,
Love also exists between
The non-living and non-living.
It is between atoms,
Sun and planets,
The universe is in 1.

Comments about The Third Fact by Kelvin TakyiBobi

  • Rookie - 45 Points Mary Amrutha (11/18/2013 12:53:00 AM)

    but can u call dat love.. d poem is good but I don't agree wit d last few lines.. because God created man nd what made him different from other things he created is his ability to love. forgive, smile so and so.. we can talk about this if u wanted to but not here.. cuz I hate typing verification codes all the tym (Report) Reply

    Rookie - 40 Points Calvin Curdle (1/6/2015 6:08:00 AM)

    Thanks for the comment.

    What I am implying is love existing in another form. Existing as a force that hold things together.

    When u get this reply, Let me know.

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  • Rookie - 35 Points Jasmine Fafanyo Awagah (10/24/2013 11:44:00 AM)

    dis is kindda controversial 2 ders still a point in der...wasnt xpectn dis...nd dats wat makes d poem good..u beat me (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, November 18, 2013

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