The Third Fact Poem by Kelvin TakyiBobi

The Third Fact

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In a battle, a friend I fought the
Definition of love. None won.
That night, from the battle field,
I established many but two memorable
Facts.
One, love is between the lìving and
Living.
Two, love is between the living and
Non-living.
So many years passed convinced
By the two.
But,
One day a lightinning idea
Struck me! Opened revelation in me.
And it says,
Love also exists between
The non-living and non-living.
It is between atoms,
Planets,
Sun and planets,
Galaxies.
The universe is in 1.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Amrutha 18 November 2013

but can u call dat love.. d poem is good but I don't agree wit d last few lines.. because God created man nd what made him different from other things he created is his ability to love. forgive, smile so and so.. we can talk about this if u wanted to but not here.. cuz I hate typing verification codes all the tym

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Jasmine Fafanyo Awagah 24 October 2013

dis is kindda controversial 2 me..bt ders still a point in der...wasnt xpectn dis...nd dats wat makes d poem good..u beat me

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