The Thought Wanderer Poem by Caleb Gonzales

The Thought Wanderer



Building feelings within
Unseen in a mad world
Looking for peace in the dark
Trying to get closer to what seems to be
The truth in doubt, a false reality
Hiding in plain sight
As an explosion of emotions fills my thoughts
I wander in my head

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leah Ayliffe 08 July 2014

Unseen in a mad world Looking for peace in the dark Trying to get closer to what seems to be The truth in doubt, a false reality Truly great writing. Well done, I love this one!

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Susan Lacovara 05 May 2014

I too, have wandered many miles in my thoughts...looking for signposts at each new crossroad. Your write speaks volumes! Well done my friend! Remember it's always best to breath deep and rest awhile...it's a long journey! PEACE

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Colleen Courtney 04 May 2014

All those crazy thoughts which make our minds continually spin! Cause of so many sleepless nights! Nicely written piece!

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Caleb Gonzales

Caleb Gonzales

Bakersfield California
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