Caleb Gonzales

Rookie - 9 Points (05/13/1992-05/13/2092 / Bakersfield California)

The thought wanderer


Building feelings within
Unseen in a mad world
Looking for peace in the dark
Trying to get closer to what seems to be
The truth in doubt, a false reality
Hiding in plain sight
As an explosion of emotions fills my thoughts
I wander in my head

Submitted: Sunday, May 04, 2014

Topic of this poem: art


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  • Freshman - 1,455 Points Leah Ayliffe (7/8/2014 12:35:00 PM)

    Unseen in a mad world
    Looking for peace in the dark
    Trying to get closer to what seems to be
    The truth in doubt, a false reality
    Truly great writing. Well done, I love this one! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,596 Points Susan Lacovara (5/5/2014 7:38:00 PM)

    I too, have wandered many miles in my thoughts...looking for signposts at each new crossroad. Your write speaks volumes! Well done my friend! Remember it's always best to breath deep and rest awhile...it's a long journey! PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 37 Points Colleen Courtney (5/4/2014 11:10:00 AM)

    All those crazy thoughts which make our minds continually spin! Cause of so many sleepless nights!
    Nicely written piece! (Report) Reply

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