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Kesav Easwaran (10/16/2008 12:46:00 AM)
a very good longing for a very good touch...the last stanza lines are beautifully worded...good meaningful devotional write, Cathy...a ten for sure |
Jerry Hughes (9/23/2008 12:31:00 AM)
......you're obviously a woman in need Cathleen, I hope you find what you're looking for soon. Best, Jerry |
Sarwar Chowdhury (8/12/2008 3:00:00 PM)
...well expressed indeed.....10 |
Donny Pascal (7/24/2008 1:46:00 AM)
A touch can mean many things. You feel love and i feel that i can relate to this poem. Thank you for helping me become a better poet...God Bless |
Dr.subhendu Kar (6/10/2008 6:56:00 AM)
touch still overwhelmes on the rune of passion
love seems to be razzling splashing the shadow
when it is soft and subtle breath wrought on paper of desire
inklling of love bestirs by the flairs of moon lit night..............lovely poem by the imagery of wishful love when besortted by the nature when scintillating, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing |
Yoonoos Peerbocus (6/5/2008 12:40:00 AM)
touch is love itself........a sense of healing......mother's touch |
Jon London (5/1/2008 9:11:00 PM)
Cathleen,
you truly are a remarkable writer, your use and flow of words is extraordinary..
such vision within your creations..its always a pleasure to read such fine work.
All the very best
Jon |
Hemakumar Nanayakkara (4/25/2008 10:40:00 PM)
A beautifully worded poem. The expressions were touching. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. |
Dr.subhendu Kar (3/15/2008 11:51:00 PM)
touch when twitched by the quest
love seems razzle as lightening in the rain
may not shock but may burn the tears by the love..when fired..............raving of love excellence when remembered, , , , , , , sui-generis, with credit of 10, well-penned, thanks for sharing |
C.R. Clark (3/10/2008 12:45:00 PM)
A very nice write, Cathleen. Sometimes, the magic of such a touch by another, even though it may be brief, causes a spark which ignites a fire in the memory that will not allow it to be forgotten, but dwelled upon and relished. This seems to be such a touch. Thanks, I enjoyed reading this poem. Best regards, Richard |
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