The Touch Of Love (Senryu) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

The depth at which these short lines strike at the heart cord is surprising indeed! VERY well done poetess.

Clarity is all that matters and you have it poetess, nice job!

Touchingly expressed and amazingly shared. Beautiful Senryu.

Thank you, Mr. Brick. The images are juxtaposed, and various meanings derive from their symbols -for intentional free interpretation (Unfinished Poetry) . To me that drop of water though, was a real-life experience. Mihaela Pirjol

Four readers wrote comments on this poem but not one of them addressed the meaning! I have to admit I'm still left out of this poem - I don't understand the images - What is that drop of water? and What metamorphosis has taken place? I have too high a regard for your poetry, for everyone's poetry to pretend to understand when I don't. Besides with the poet herself just a click away, an explanation is so easy to get! !

Remarkable Haiku, nicely done

Amazing...Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.