RIC S. BASTASA


......The Tree - Poem by RIC S. BASTASA

When the big tree falls
Hit by lightning
Roared by thunder
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Comments about ......The Tree by RIC S. BASTASA

  • Gold Star - 6,204 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (6/15/2015 12:06:00 PM)

    A compelling composition my friend! (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,882 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (4/16/2015 1:01:00 AM)

    The saying..... the bigger they are the harder they fall .... they say (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,455 Points Ken E Hall (7/26/2010 6:49:00 PM)

    She is like the tree not there anymore, ours is not to reason why..sad ending to a tale many have to bare...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joey Valenzuela (6/23/2010 10:11:00 PM)

    'you were gone. i have a good news. the arrogant person here already died. i'm happy, are you? ' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (2/18/2010 2:33:00 AM)

    nice entrance and exit... i think i rated this one 10... well expressed/said. Nice thought presentation. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 813 Points Antonio Liao (10/5/2009 3:19:00 AM)

    what a wonderful poem...a pouring of all emotion... seems
    that aim carried by stream of the past.....a nostalgia that
    forgetting the past is to begin is to live beyond today....
    a 10 ++++ yes! Boss your great....thank you and God bless (Report) Reply








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