The True Essence Of The Ocean My Love? Poem by Chuy Amante

The True Essence Of The Ocean My Love?

Rating: 5.0


Love is like the ocean?

Tell me love,

Are you not warm tides,
Are you not soft waves,
Are you not caressing
The shore, turquoise
Friendship gleefully
Bathing me?

Tell me dear,
Are you not deep and cold,
And full of beasts,
rotting Flesh and debris?
Are you not Destructive,
violent, and unrelenting?

If not these things my love,

What is your true essence?

Wednesday, September 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdulrazak Aralimatti 19 September 2015

Verily, the poem brings out both the positive and negative traits characteristics of love through the similitude to an ocean. Loved reading the poem. Added to my poem list..........10

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