The Truth Poem by lady grace

The Truth

Rating: 5.0


Lousy
that’s typical...

mind doesn’t sleep
intelligence never fall...

may not shine in this field
but excel in other ground...

good riddance
from this world of fools
crazy welcomes unwise
liars meet hypocrites
pretender never sleeps
awake to every mistake...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 14 September 2009

It is true that 'from this world of fools crazy welcomes unwise! ' What to do here! Simply ignore and proceed!

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Ravi Sathasivam 14 September 2009

'mind doesn’t sleep intelligence never fall...' Beautiful. Well said Enjoyed reading it Thanks

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Noel Horlanda 14 September 2009

Your title of this piece is mind bungling. At first I don't understand, I thought you're joking. Upon the read I found out the lines aren't plastic in nature, you speak the truth particularly the last stanza. I love the truth.

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C. P. Sharma 14 September 2009

Grace, Romantic suspense '..........' Tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow Creeps in this petty pace from day to day Til the last syllable of recorded time. And all our yesterdays light fools......... CP

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Miriam Maia Padua 14 September 2009

mind-working title speaks a lot striking thoughts 10 lovelots, maia

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Seema Chowdhury 25 September 2009

don't give up. life has its ups and downs. you will get your share of goods days and will meet good people too. pl see some of my poems too.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 17 September 2009

A terse poem that says a great deal about the challenges of the mind.

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John Knight 17 September 2009

Hi Lady Grace - sometimes we feel we are on the wrong side of reality. You seem so low in this poem that things can only get better and better and better. Reach out we are all there for you 24/7. Score it a MAX for pathos! Love in Poetry - JOHN

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Hazem Al Jaber 16 September 2009

nice and well written, , you tried to tell alot through this short one, ... nice.. hazem al..

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Dr.subhendu Kar 15 September 2009

crazy welcomes unwise liars meet hypocrites pretender never sleeps awake to every mistake....................ingenious write by imagery, and beautifully expressed by the natures of human being and the words of wisdom,10+++,5thanks for sharing

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