The Twinkling Star Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

The Twinkling Star

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You are insignificant creature
Always fighting for future
For well being and comfortable
Ready to face any struggle

You consider it as goal
Respond to it as sincere call
Avail the best opportunity
And prove the capacity

It is known
Efforts should be of your own
"It pays in long run"
Life is no fun

The life affords you chance
Hat is not often but at once
Seize it as if not going to happen again
It will certainly be success with gain

Think that you are no one
In this vast ocean
Many people have perished so far
You can expect to be only twinkling star

Thursday, August 14, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 August 2014

You are insignificant creature Always fighting for future

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 August 2014

Shujat Ahmad likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 August 2014

Amazing Karen PearlLess than a minute ago It's well written and a divine poem! Great job! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 August 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 21 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 August 2014

Mitos Jane Tugade Nepomuceno ?? 19 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 August 2014

Nice 14 Aug by Seema Chowdhury to Only twinkling star

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Geetha Jayakumar 14 August 2014

Beautiful and thoughtful write.Very true said.. Think that you are no one In this vast ocean Many people have perished so far You can expect to be only twinkling star..... Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 August 2014

Good: Jay Matthews3 minutes ago Good:

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