The Uncomfortable Poem by auty paul jason

The Uncomfortable

Rating: 5.0


Getting used to
Sit here and there
Never really known
What I'm doing
The fast age of life is tough
I know
Crossing the bridge is more difficult than anything
So,
I ran away from her
I ran away from here
And
I ran away from me
But,
After all,
It is just me, who is getting uncomfortable.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

This is a nice inductive poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Sheldon Saluta 13 April 2010

i like it! it sounds and felt the uneasiness! the lines are well stroke! i like it... perfect 10

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