Jeline Loh

Rookie (6 September 1986)

The Valley Of The Alley - Poem by Jeline Loh

As I walked through the valley
The valley of life or the other
Dark and winded is the other alley
I couldn’t foretell if I even bother

The journey is such a pang
I doubt there is enjoyment
The process is far too long
If it will only bring torment

For some it is to endure
For others it is to fulfill
For me I am rather aware
That I would rather enthrall

In either alley let us will
In either valley let us triumph


Comments about The Valley Of The Alley by Jeline Loh

  • Rookie Jeline Loh Jen-Li (1/19/2012 3:14:00 AM)

    Thank you so much! It excites me to know that! :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Dead Rose (1/17/2012 5:52:00 AM)

    beautiful poem, ,
    good rhythm
    good rhyme
    10********
    Rose))))))))) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,913 Points Dave Walker (1/17/2012 3:42:00 AM)

    Nice flowing poem, good write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 2, 2012


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