The Vibrant Energy Source Poem by Gangadharan nair Pulingat..

The Vibrant Energy Source

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You boast about your beautiful garden
The greenery of meadow man made
Making your own efforts to happy always
But remember, I am behind all this
Unless my energy gives you all
Unless I makes my own ways in such a moderation
Everything is lost in your garden
The flowering plant becomes rotten ones
Flowers are no where to visible
You boast about your on vigor and intelligence
Remember you are indebted to the sun always
Every plant, life, and even the whole world
The vibrant and ever active sun behind.

Thursday, December 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sun
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sun the most vibrant planet for world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 10 December 2015

Glowing tribute paid to Sun, the god of light who enables life, flora and fauna, to flourish on this planet. Nicely penned realistic poe. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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