The War Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

The War

Rating: 4.2


Not within continuing
forever beyond limits
away from minds
expressing negations
to get a series of
affirmative replies
premeditated purposes
intentional advances
deliberated confessions
thrown afar in haste
battles of clash
growing inside
anxious pressure
tensions galore
erupting in moments
to disintegrate in bits
having a memoir
of lost combats
eternal aggressions
bethink to start.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanjib Das 10 October 2009

THIS IS NOT A POEM BUT AN UNIVERSAL TRUTH. NICELY WRITTEN AND I GIVE YOU 11/10

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Rayan Ali 08 October 2009

each n every word.....very true!

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Lynn Glover 08 October 2009

Good write enjoyed the read, Many thoughts gather in my mind as I read the poem. Thanks for the invite. Lynn

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 23 September 2009

10...deep thoughts to ponder on.....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 August 2009

having a memoir of lost combats eternal aggressions bethink to start. it is battle from inner coul....really conflicting ones....10 read mine serious thoguths.. thoughts...

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