The War Mongers Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

The War Mongers

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“If blood is tested by tiger” the legend says
It will become deadly hunter
Attack human being live stocks
It will become matter of game joke

Same way if person has tested woman
It shall be unbearable situation
He will go out for lust and try
The woman then becomes simple toy

In both the cases it is proven formula
Person finds daily new agenda
Goes for hunt and aims at new target
The innocent girls fall in trap

The wild animal can be caged
But what about young and aged
The vultures are out in many forms
Who will take care and inform?

Let us not become habitual
The bad habits sometimes remain not casual
They surface with strong urge
It will be then difficult to purge

The war mongers are of same breed
They have money and blood greet
They want to keep areas under check and boiling
It gives them immense pleasure with smiling

Thursday, April 17, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 April 2014

“If blood is tested by tiger” the legend says It will become deadly hunter

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Gajanan Mishra 17 April 2014

good writing sir, I like it. Let us not become habitual, thanks.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 April 2014

Lisa Lombardi likes this. Lisa Lombardi Let us not become habitual The bad habits sometimes remain not casual They surface with strong urge It will be then difficult to purge... Nice! ! ! 4 mins · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 April 2014

No flow Clint Miller18 minutes ago Too many grammatical errors and there is no flow. The analogies are ok. Give it some structure.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 April 2014

:) Aspen-Skye Lee17 minutes ago This is pretty good. Took me personally to understand what it was about -forgot to read title- then I figured it out through the poem. ^_^ Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 April 2014

You seem like a wise person. Someone who has experienced both sides of many cases. I like this. 9 hours ago by lydia molinaro to The war mongers

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

welcome stuti nayak 19 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcome Maricela Ramírez, Shujat Ahmad 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 April 2014

Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh! 2 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 April 2014

Brilliant! Paul Woodward15 minutes ago I absolutely love this. Says so much and I love the word arrangement! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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