Pasquale DiMeola

Rookie - 54 Points (Newark, New Jersey)

The Water Is Fine - Poem by Pasquale DiMeola

When you whisper a weary 'I love you'
With a content stare of love's aftermath
And we lose ourselves in a sky so blue
Having emerged from a romantic bath

Who may prevent our hearts overtaking
This emotional surge such as we bound
May find in time how sadly mistaken
To envy that which is theirs' to be found.


Comments about The Water Is Fine by Pasquale DiMeola

  • Veteran Poet - 1,909 Points Tiku . (8/18/2013 5:36:00 AM)

    Who may prevent our hearts overtaking
    This emotional surge such as we bound
    is really beautiful write.liked it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 6, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 7, 2013


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