Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 10,311 Points (17.03.1965)

The Waves Of Nature - Poem by Lyn Paul

Natures gift
Natures beauty, Heart so raw
Hair so golden
Smile so wide
Faced the waves
When the tide was high

Watched natures beauty
Admiring much
Followed that sunshine
Believed in life's touch

Natures garden
Oh! How it grows
So simple
Picturesque
The beauty it show

The waves of nature
Will turn for you
The seasons of time
How you once grew

The ups the downs
The highs the lows
Fizzy gone flat
A lifeless show

Repairing the wick
Trying to heal
Watching the waves of nature
Eases the pain
Following the footsteps
Feeling the rain

Smell the wet sand
Hear the waves raw
Get ready for life
To open a new door

The waves of nature
Are there for you
So much to achieve
So much to still do





Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL


Comments about The Waves Of Nature by Lyn Paul

  • Silver Star - 3,035 Points Ken E Hall (5/11/2015 5:53:00 AM)

    The waves of nature explained in your unique way and are we so lucky to see beauty at its best...we are so dependant to it all as we are part of nature itself...love the voice in the poem get ready for life...reagards (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 125 Points Benjamin Michael Clark (6/16/2014 11:54:00 AM)

    Great write. Nature speaks to us in music. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,410 Points Amitava Sur (2/16/2014 10:47:00 AM)

    The nature/s beauty is bountiful, only a connoiseur can feel it. The variety of it's beauty is very nicely expressed here. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,038 Points Diane Hine (2/7/2014 4:02:00 AM)

    Funny how the waves' energy washes away our anxieties - temporarily at least. Beautifully expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,329 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (1/29/2014 11:12:00 AM)

    We are here because of this wonderful Nature......awake see the light, sleep see the night, dream see the heaven, rhyme see how buds and blossoms, birds and flowers, fruits and seeds coming to waves of life.....Lyn...
    and our life flows on and on in Nature's lap till the last breath of life.................well penned (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,827 Points Geetha Jayakumar (1/27/2014 8:36:00 AM)

    Nature has gifted us many beautiful things. It depends on how many have enjoyed those beauties...Your eyes have caught a splendid nature...Loved it. Fantastic write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 169 Points marvin brato (1/25/2014 4:23:00 AM)

    Nature indeed has waves of beautiful things... lets appreciate it while we can! Nice. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,962 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (1/23/2014 7:35:00 AM)

    Sunshine, garden, waves, sand on the beaches, seasons, ... beautiful features of nature are limitless. Nice poem capturing the beauties. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (1/23/2014 1:01:00 AM)

    The beauty of things lies in the eyes of the onlooker and as a poet you have seen nature for all of us and we have to feel the sweet touch of these waves, Lyn. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,064 Points Kanav Justa (1/19/2014 11:51:00 PM)

    , , , , , there is magic in nature, , , the one which can lighten the days of humans, , , lovely write, , (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,619 Points Valsa George (1/18/2014 11:36:00 PM)

    Nature with her varied manifestations of beauty and wonder throws before us, immense scope for enjoyment and solace... Turn to Nature when we are glum..... She is sure to delight us. Enjoyed this poem on Nature! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,515 Points Valerie Dohren (1/18/2014 12:26:00 PM)

    A lovely descriptive poem Lyn - there is always so much in nature's bounty to feed the soul and raise the spirit when it is low. Well written. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,245 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (1/18/2014 9:10:00 AM)

    you remind us poet there's so much yet unseen with no time to lose. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 18, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 7, 2015


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