The Weed (Part I) Poem by marie vedette

The Weed (Part I)

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Standing alone in the field
Strong and sturdy indeed
Still lovely, even though its a weed
This yellow beauty shines strong and bright

Not alone anymore
A flower has sprouted
Its beauty unmatched -
Or so it says
Better in every way
Everyone knows flowers are best
More lovely, more wanted, more fragrant

The weed hangs its head,
Day after day the flower boasts its beauty

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 October 2009

well written! .........

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Ying Escalona 27 October 2009

nice flow of words but still i love that weeds.

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