The Whiskey Poem by John Kipling Lewis

The Whiskey

Rating: 3.7


I used to drink myself to sleep.
I found comfort in the bottle.

I remember the taste on my lips,
the curve in my hand and
I still feel the burn in the pit of my stomach.

The whiskey sings a sweet low song and
I can only hold my empty glass, sing along.
I can only hold an empty glass and sing along.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K Holoholo 06 November 2007

Wow......what a sobering poem. I think it is perfect the way it is. It's a poem to pass around at AA meetings, on a little piece of paper. It is what I would say could be a helpful poem. Good Job! ! ! ! !

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

3. Poems about alcohol are a dime a dozen and this one says nothing new and has no original details whatsoever.

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Patricia Gale 25 February 2006

Comfort in a bottle a way to escape this life. Been there, sharing my sorrows with crown royal. Good write Patricia

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