The Wind Poem by Subrat Pradhan

The Wind

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Hey the wind!
Please stay a while
where from
And where are you going?
Please sit under my branches
I will caress your body
you look so tired
drenched and thirsty
Oh queen soothing one
so loving one
let me caress your soft and silky body
with my lovely new leaves
All your worries will be away soon
dont you have a little time for me
With my soft words
My cool shades
soon you will have nap
Then you may leave dear
And you sit silently
and then left smilingly
soon out of my sight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hezekiah Toheeb Tiamiyu 20 January 2013

Fantastic poem... Nice imagination and personification... Kudos! ~TT~

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 11 January 2013

what an imagination! the wind gets cooled, either it takes oxygen or carbon di oxide when it leaves! refreshing!

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