Violetta Sunshine


The Window - Poem by Violetta Sunshine

My breath is written on the glass,
A colourless canvas of my life,
In a private gallery of my own,
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is about someone with depression who is always sat by the window lamenting.

Comments about The Window by Violetta Sunshine

  • Rookie Sarah Rose (9/22/2013 7:03:00 AM)

    Thank you Unwritten Soul that means a lot to me. Yes this poem is how I really feel during my period of depression. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,353 Points Unwritten Soul (9/22/2013 12:44:00 AM)

    Amazing, i like the perspective you done on The Window...that speaks from your soul...this is original view! ..loved it_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,421 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/21/2013 12:22:00 PM)

    Wow! I am amazed to see such a wonderful piece of poetry! 10/10.
    'But for now I am a silhouetted spectator,
    Beholding the moving painting of the land,
    And lamenting that a window is not a door.'
    Excellent expression! Love it. (Report) Reply








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