The Window Poem by Ross Maclennan

The Window



I'm sure it was just yesterday
I left my glasses by the sink.
The children gone outside to play,
a rare and treasured time to think.

The radio kept ragged time,
accompanied a day of drudge,
with washer, dryer, brush and broom.
I would not change it - Would I 'fudge! '

It was not like this in my dreams,
I did not play at serf and hen.
I ruled the world. I cured the sick.
I laughed and stayed out after ten.

And then I looked out at my life,
from grubby knees to tousled top.
Beyond them, glowing, is my wife.
My world is one I would not swop.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Ran it off as a response to the Adlestrop Poem competition mentioned in Country Life this week. I think it echoes the ultimate contentment of the original whilst summarising the fragility of that happiness. And then context is everything and times have changed.

It had to be in the same form as the original: 16 lines. But I kept closer with 8 syllables a line and rhyme second and last lines of each 4 line verse. Who knows - all just good clean fun. They will judge by beginning of May 14. I have entered it but look forward to seeing the really good stuff.
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