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(09/13/1943 / new york city)
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  there was three men who met GOD.
and GOD said:
i will grant you the one thing
that you want most in the world.

the first man jumped up and replied:
i want to be the richest man in the world.
granted: GOD said

the second man said:
i want to be the most knowledgeable
man in the world.
granted: GOD said

then GOD turned to the third man and asked
what would you like?
the man pondered all the possibilities
and softly responded: 'free will'.

GOD looked at him and said:
you could have wealth or knowledge
like the other two, or health, love
anything that you want.
why did you pick free will?

well GOD: with free will, i could
make any choices that i want
and if it is wrong, i learn from the experience.
i could search for knowledge
and be able to achieve wealth
and read books to open
the mind that you have given me.

i could experience love, joy, sorrow,
happiness, sadness.
and use the five senses
that you have bestowed upon me.

let me see and feel all the beauties
of the world, and the wonders of my soul.
this is something that i could forever hold.

why would i want to change
what you have given me.
you don't make mistakes
this much i see.

GOD looked upon him and said:
you did not seek the material
things in this life.
but accepted what i have given.
and this is what is called 'living'.

you are truly one of the sons of GOD.
for it is within your heart.


louis rams

Submitted Date Saturday, November 28, 2009
Submitted Date Saturday, November 28, 2009



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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (12/22/2009 9:45:00 PM)
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a poem that imparts immense knowledge...your narration is excellent..thanks for this lovely poem...goes into my favs.....10
Christine Kerr (12/20/2009 12:52:00 AM)
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Two words...Free Will They say and can do so much. You explained it so well. Funny how it all fits together. It's amazing how a man with such few words can say so much. That in it's self says a lot. Thanks for sharing
Kranthi Pothineni (12/9/2009 1:41:00 AM)
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Aww...enjoyed the story a lot. Very meaningful composition and your narration part speaks on its own. Very glad to read it.
Shashendra Amalshan (12/9/2009 1:01:00 AM)
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This is a very inspirational poem..... Your narratives always bring out good moral messages..10++

regards
Shan
Leslie Alexis (Heaven is My Home) (12/8/2009 12:20:00 PM)
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I too want free will.. but most.. i want to be his.. that is what i want. :) .
Carol Gall (11/28/2009 12:52:00 PM)
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lovely louis a lesson well learned 10

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