Then And Now Poem by Chen-ou Liu

Then And Now



A Tanka Set

The feeling of love is [not] something that is transient or can be tarnished by the works of time -paraphrasingSreoshi Sengupta


strawberry juice
drips from a corner
of her mouth
on this sultry night
the taste of my first love

barefoot
in the cherry blossom rain
with heart abandoned
my first taste
of a passing love

Friday, November 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: breaking up,love,relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Binayakumar Mohanty 09 November 2018

Strawberry juice drips from a corner of her mouth on this sultry night.Nice imagery used.Deeper sensing poem.Thanks for sharing.I invite you to read my poem Sad death of a butterfly. Regards.

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