Then What? Poem by Jonathan ROBIN

Then What?

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When two no longer share from day to day
love set to span eternal rainbow years,
encounter prematurely hell's harsh way
when, unprepared, warmth wanes in winter's tears,
when morn lights up wan mourning heart apart,
when cold creeps irrespective of bright ray,
when what was wed is sudden torn apart,
when what was said can't be explained away,
when Past's outcast, when there's no second start,
when all horizons darken into one,
when time's conveyed on sodden tumbrel cart,
warp weft reft patterns warped, thread dead, undone,
when, where two played, one, sad, remains, cheeks grey
what then … when there is nothing more to say?

When time and tide convert joy ride to rime
when day to day withdrawal meets an empty shell,
when seasons pass without heart healed in rhyme,
when magic spell is hexxed by tocsin bell,
when life's leaves dropp from calendar ignored,
when dewdropp twin tears drip drip down unwiped,
when memory's red rims dim unrestored,
when hope's kite topsy turvy tumbles, swiped,
when effort seems enormous, dreams are stilled,
when monochrome replaces rosy tint,
when days discount ambitions unfulfilled,
when nightmares metamorphose heart to flint,
when one is left bereft of life support,
what then for sole soul caught disarmed, distraught?

When who once woke to welcome rising sun
ignores the twilight polychrome a-twinkle,
when who once echoed soul mate's fair fate spun,
cares naught for falling cobweb hair a-wrinkle.
When insights shared, warm hearts bared, take French leave
from daily humdrum's wear and tear erosion,
when Fate metes out defeat, with sleeve to grieve,
eliminates spontaneous joy's explosion,
when what once shone is gone, all trace erased
from petty pace, brief candle lost to light,
when player struts stage hour, page flower phase
hung sere upon the stage, adieu delight,
when pair dissolves, bridge partner trumped withal,
what then when there's no dare which one might call?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Second and third sonnets added 24 November 2012

Initial Version

When two no longer share from day to day
love that should have spanned the rainbow of the years,
prepared hell prematurely in their way,
as when warmth meets with Winter's frosty tears,

when dawn lights up a mourning heart apart,
when cold creeps up regardless of bright ray,
when what was wed is sudden torn apart,
when was was said can't be explained away,

when Past's outcast, when there's no second start,
when all horizons darken into one,
when time's conveyed upon a tumbril cart,
when warp and weft and pattern are undone,

when where two played but one remains, cheeks grey,
what then, when there is nothing more to say?

27 September 1996

revised version
When two no longer share from day to day
love set to span eternal rainbow years,
encounter prematurely hell's harsh way
when, unprepared, warmth wanes in winter's tears,

when morn lights up wan mourning heart apart,
when cold creeps irrespective of bright ray,
when what was wed is sudden torn apart,
when was was said can't be explained away,

when Past's outcast, when there's no second start,
when all horizons darken into one,
when time's conveyed on sodden tumbrel cart,
warp weft reft patterns warped, thread dead, undone,

when, where two played, one, sad, remains, cheeks grey -
what then … when there is nothing more to say?

27 September 1996 revised 3 December 2008 and 22 April 2009
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