There's Never A Way To Say Good-Bye To Love Ones Poem by mona martinez

There's Never A Way To Say Good-Bye To Love Ones

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running out of ways to deal,
when all i have is pain,
nagative thoughts comes to my mind,
none which are agreeable,
just let me be selfish,
i'm sick of this,
who wants a life filled with pain,
my family just can't understand,
how unhappy i am,
because they want me to stay,
but, can't understand what i go through,
just to seem fine in front of the niece and nephews,
that's why i'm planning carefully,
not to leave many broken hearts,
when i leave this life,
but i guess there is really no right way,
to say good-bye to the people you care about..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Brewer 01 June 2009

hey, there isnt a good way to say goodbye to loved ones, it's a hard thing to do. good write. xx

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Dr.subhendu Kar 01 June 2009

but i guess there is really no right way, to say good-bye to the people you care about....................at times that happens to happen by beating the brain, but it is not wise to say good bye to people of own and it recoils soon...wonderful wright by imagery,10+++.., thanks for sharing

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Alen Alexander 01 June 2009

first time ever read about such a theme, nice!

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Csdb Kind 15 June 2009

i see pain in this, however i also feel pity. am i wrong? your thoughts are not you. your thoughts about others are not them. although, understanding makes everything alright, one day someone will understand, but you must look for him/her. thank you for speaking your truth,

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nope there is not. and you not going anywhere.. nice poetry

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Ruerd Visser 02 June 2009

A cry from the heart entangled in a drama that does´nt become you. I hope you see a guiding light trowing a spark to free yourself. Angelgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

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Saadat Tahir 01 June 2009

ya full of paim an anguish...goodbye are difff but also imortant for the so called closure nice lines cheers

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Sphoky Matosh 01 June 2009

goodbye is the hardest word anyone has to say especially to loved ones. the thought of leaving them with a loop hole...

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