There Will Be No Saving Tonight Poem by Fading Heart

There Will Be No Saving Tonight

Rating: 4.8


The lier does not sing
The lier awaits hes target
The target is set on me

The betrail
The hurt
The knowledge of you with
another behind my own flesh

The email of this from someone else
Was below you.
Yet my feelings have not faded

The lier
There will be no saving
Tonight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jim Norausky 23 December 2008

Emmajoy, you are developing your talent. 'The knowledge of you with another behind my own flesh' is very poetic and mature. Keep writing! Thanks.

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Elsa Wallin 21 December 2008

I really like the poem, it's hard to describe but I really like it.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 21 December 2008

i liked it you must have put alot of effort in for this so i give your poem, your effort, a ten

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