Therefore Never Call Me Dear Poem by Liza Sud

Therefore Never Call Me Dear

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With an interest I’ll pay you back.
Therefore never call me dear.
Or I will call you my beloved
Under October night star!

You have very beautiful breast
in the black-and-white striped sweater.
In full moon it’s - mercury,
But no one wipes away my tears.

I do not forgive tenderness –.
And I see no excuse for weasel.
I’ll imprison you by myself,
after just having raped you, dear!

Of course sodomy is a sin.
But at last I will spit on it.
As for dears – you capture them
And kiss them with a savageness.

Wednesday, October 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dear
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 28 October 2015

YOU KISS THEM WITH SAVAGENESS - is that an image of rape? or is it an image of desperation? The language of this poem is really extreme but I can't understand what motivates it. Is the one speaking male or female? What provokes the rough language? I sense the speaker has been deeply hurt by another person in the past and is extremely fearful and angry in the present.Is that what the poem says?

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Kinyua Karanja 28 October 2015

Great I could see the whole scenerio; the aggressive and haunting tone to that innocent heart and ears that has no power to defend herself from this- that could harm that harmless creature. great.

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