Theres A War, 2 Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Theres A War, 2

Rating: 5.0


THERES a war going on,
theres a war in me,
times are changing, like the color
of the sea.
THERES a lady that i
used to know, gonna die
soon, or so im told,
but they want listen to me, no they
want be able to see, a little distruction,
coming down on me.
THERES a war going on,
theres a war on these
streets, peaple laughing, peaple crying,
peaple killing for peace,
theres a lady i use to know,
gonna die soon, or so im told.
but they want listen to me, no they want
be able to see, a little distruction,
coming down on me...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 06 May 2006

i think we all can relate to this one, war divides as well as unifies (our emotions) . what duncan said, about you and your closest- hope all is well. Sus.

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Duncan Wyllie 06 May 2006

Very well written, lots of emotion and deep thinking contained in this one, many can relate to this type of situation, I hope that you and your closest are well Love duncan

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