These Arms Of Mine Poem by Black on Black Arts

These Arms Of Mine

Rating: 4.7


Open and waiting.
Comforting yet anticipating.
Sheltering and protective.

These arms of mine

Will help you take the pain away.
In these arms your more than welcome to stay.
Cry on my shoulders I don't mind.
There are not more secure shoulders you will find.

These arms of mine

You can hold me tight.
In these arms everything will be alright.
Embrace these arms when your emotions run deep.
In my arms you can cry yourself to sleep.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darkangel Flyfree 19 July 2012

Awww a very sweet and beautiful poem! I can feel your desire to open up those arms and hold that painful soul. Very touching write!

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Unwritten Soul 20 July 2012

The feeling in this poem such a whitest healing liquid to fade any traces of blackest hurt, the words in this poem really armed by the strong idea, emotion and title itself..so good_Unwritten Soul

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Heather Wilson 20 July 2012

A beautiful poem, a romantic caring heart shines through in this write.

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Shivani Yadav 13 July 2012

hi! You have written this really from heart, describing the emotions in the way which is beautiful :) n i'll like if u'll visit my page too n read my poems n give me yo openion as im new hea :)

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Captain Cur 17 July 2012

I sensed deep feeling in this poem and a desire to help share burdens of others.

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Ifetayo Abiola 02 October 2012

HOW I LOVE THIS POEM

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Kasia Fedyk 26 July 2012

Warms my heart and fills my soul this poem is beautiful, tender, caring, and most of all abundant in so much love, these arms of yours. Sublime!

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Shai Cherry 23 July 2012

very beautiful and romantic

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Roong S 21 July 2012

wow..like it a lot..very well written!

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Monciana Edmondson 20 July 2012

I like it, it is very sensual, however it feels incomplete.

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