They Say – Love Is….. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

They Say – Love Is…..

Rating: 5.0


They say love is magic,
then why I am superstitious!

They say love is patient,
then why I am impatient and nervous!

They say love is brave,
then why I am afraid!

They say love is blind,
then why I am judgmental!

They say love is trust,
then why I suspect!

They say love is unconditional,
then why I fell conditioned!

They say love heals,
then why I feel hurt!

They say love forgives,
then why I am blamed!


Is something wrong with me or
Love is untrue.

Monday, September 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanjukta Nag 14 September 2015

Amazing.. the contrast ideas you have showed here just made me speechless. Though each line denies the other one, but a reader has to agree with both of them. outstanding vision. loved it. this is beyond any rating.

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M Asim Nehal 14 September 2015

I am so happy that u liked it.........Thanks much for review and nice analysis, I admire.

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David Wood 14 September 2015

As the song says, 'love is a many splendid thing, ' once you have it you have to treasure it. Lovely poem Mohammed

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M Asim Nehal 14 September 2015

Thanks much, I appreciate your comments David.

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Bharati Nayak 25 September 2015

Under the magic spell of love all the true lovers go through this stage.They ask the questions you ask yourself.Love is an enigma.Perhaps it is beyond human comprehension to know why such contradictory feelings come when one knows his feelings are true.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2015

So nice poem...19 If someone refuses for reasons One should not take it personally You may be loving passionately But not admitting tentatively You may have many excuses And refuse Other’s angle But it differs from an individual to individual

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 17 September 2015

A good depiction in a comparative style.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2015

Love is not untrue and this is amazingly magic on expression and feeling as you have shared in poem. Fantastic sharing....10

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Akhtar Jawad 14 September 2015

Neither you are wrong nor your love is untrue, fleeting of mind is a part of our thoughts. You have nicely described this fleeting of mind, a great poem.....................10

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M Asim Nehal 14 September 2015

Thanks a lot for nice comments.

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