They Say We Must Fight To Keep Our Freedom Poem by Thampi KEE

They Say We Must Fight To Keep Our Freedom

Rating: 5.0


when you come
with a knife
I wish to be killed
you kicked, and left for ever
a betrayel
a sad cry
and left here
nobody looks

sadly, she come with a pale rose

she knows
they say
we must fight to keep our freedom

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 19 April 2007

Very deep feelings expressed here. The line about the pale rose is especially poignant. Fine work, Thampi. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Gregory Collins 26 June 2007

does a pale rose cry love or shake petals from the lover

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Kanav Justa 06 December 2013

, , , woww, , , this is a great write, , , , , , , , loved it, , ,

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rago rago 20 April 2009

a beautiful write.......and just in brief. Good expression.

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premji premji 12 July 2008

So you know the key of freedom! good write...

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Malini Kadir 31 March 2008

A very beautiful poetry! peace......with non violence Or gentle victory with no weapons...strong imagery! lovely work!

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Marvin Brato 26 July 2007

In our country we once overthrown a dictator with a red rose and a rosary against cannon and tanks, and obtained our vctory. We can win freedom without bloodshed! Thanks for sharing.10 for it.

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