Thing Poem by David Floren

Thing



Life is rich with such variety.
Makes me itch with much anxiety

For liberal action.
For impact and traction

I'll cling to excess,

Not redact like a
Reactionary canary,

Picking bones with pith
In a dreary ossuary.


[11-23-97 San Diego, CA (rev.1 2-10-08 Livermore, CA) ]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Floren 10 February 2008

I agree, Tai Chi. This one doesn't quite flow. Pardon me though. You see, It was written long ago.

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Tai Chi Italy 10 February 2008

Thing IS, you kind of lost it with the Canary David! the flow I mean. Smiling at you, Tai

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