Things Of Crumbs Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

Things Of Crumbs

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Things of crumbs
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Things of crumbs asked
And even that little is not granted
Hence in silence heart is broken
With a sorrow not known
Pushing you down to the bottom
And you walk your way alone
The worst of all emotions
Confines you as if in a prison
With a tearful cadence
You groan with cramps
And your face turns furious
It comes when you miss
The goal almost in sight of goal
Despite best efforts
On love, toil and talent it takes a toll
Then comes its cousin
Causing a lot of damage to your potential
It is felt when things are stuck
Things take time to move
And when they move, you will be in hell
And think that you have not picked up the right goal
It takes away your prime energy
And turns you a person distasteful
This is none other than
Disappointment followed by frustration
And this can be overcome
If you hold fast to hope
No matter looks how small

Saturday, September 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salini Nair 22 September 2014

f you hold fast to hope No matter looks how small......................wise write

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Valsa George 21 September 2014

Even when we lose many things in life and are denied of the basic subsistence, Hope helps us from falling into the deep pit of despair! The poem concludes not as it began, but in a note of hope and optimism..... Enjoyed! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 September 2014

Things of crumbs pushing you down the bottom to no matter looks how small, this poem expresses hope of higher order. Nicely penned.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 September 2014

a poem of hope, things of crumbs with crumbic line If you hold fast to hope No matter looks how small I don't dare to say iambic well composed poem Deepak enlightening as Deepak 10

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