Thinking Of Thoughts Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Thinking Of Thoughts

Rating: 4.7


Under the hands of ancient sun
We wash our thoughts
And leave them amidst the blades of grass,
To be soaked again
By the watery faces of clouds.
A game of recycling is played everyday
On the transparency of life.
Rain makes some words fertile
Some are still barren,
Waiting with a curious mind, full of yearning
To be chosen
For painting red a poem of love.

Saturday, November 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: creation,imagination,poem,symbolic,thought
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 14 November 2015

Zenith of creativity, unmatched and unparallel................Classic poem yet again...SN Loved it, joy to read again and again.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 January 2016

A poem of love with the peace of the mind. Nice work.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 November 2015

Thoughts recycle adding something new every time. Some thoughts may solidify at some point and result in a beautiful poem.

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Loke Kok Yee 14 November 2015

after reading my imagination ran wild thanks-10

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Souren Mondal 14 November 2015

In just three sentences you PAINT a fine 'portrait' of how the psyche of human beings work while producing and reproducing as well as 'recycling' a thought or a series of thoughts.. You could have easily added Imagism and Mystycism as a topic for this poem Sanjukta.. A brilliant read. Thanks for sharing. A perfect 10 :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2015

For painting and reading a poem of love, ancient sun has kept emotion under hands to wash new thoughts in to interesting imagery. Fantastic poem shared...10

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