Thinking Of You Poem by Maria Trinidad Mahusay

Thinking Of You

Rating: 5.0


Thinking about you,
Thinking always of you,
I want you to feel me,
Feel this loving heart that loving you.

I want to see you,
Seeing you is the medicine of my sickness,
I want you so badly,
Badly I can’t think better for myself.

You captured my heart,
You drown me of your genuine attitude,
You made me feel like princess,
And I can’t control my hysterical feeling for you.

I’m thinking about you,
Thinking always of you,
What can I do?
All I know is thinking of you.

What should I do?
How can I stop thinking of you?
That all I wish,
You thinking of me too

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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